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Sunday, September 19, 2010

'Loss'

(One of my friend's grand mom, whom she lovingly called 'ammu' from childhood lived a low key selfless life, so much so that leaving herself possibly there was nobody in her immediate family who cared for her in the final days. ‘Ammu’ passed away a week back ...)

She lived a life that was nothing but misery
and then she decided ...she would 'sleep forever' from now on
Her ailing husband realized what a darling she had been
Her errant son finally cried
Stubborn son in law stood speechless
Daughter stood defeated, daughter in law as if the roof over head had just gotten apart
When she lived she had lost the battle of life
But in death she won over all whom she had lost to.

Just that small girl sitting and silently weeping in the corner
Her 'ammu' was the best all the time she had lived
and now she knows her 'ammu' will never wake up again.

The old lady won it all in eventuality… but can never compensate for the 'loss' to this girl.

10 comments:

  1. I had one aunt...who actually led such a life....eventually she died or better can i say she forced herself to death.....thanks subhadeep for rekindling her memories.....love you aunt

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  2. I had one aunt who actually led such a life....eventually she died or better can i say "forced herslf to death".....thanks subhadeep for rekindling her memories.....love you aunt

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  3. hmm... reminds of last scene of paramitar ekdin.. I mean the effect.. rather the magnitude of it..

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  4. I like...i like... I really do :) only used to ur "Rap" compositions... I know u like all 'cool daadis'!! :) and yes - ur poem rightly explains the 'loss'!! I can absolutely relate koz i do hv a 'cool daadi' at my place too...n i LOvvvvE her! :)

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  5. "my sis says u write great... so i say too :D:D i'll keep reading!"

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  6. Death equalizes all...both love and hatred...nicely depicted

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  7. hey subho its beautiful....it reminded me of my aunt who didnt have pblms but still i realized hw much i loved her when she died....

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  8. Hey!! The poem is fantastic.Future imagination is depicted with sensitive words!! Gr8 & Awesome !!!!!

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  10. @all,thanks so much ... do come up with your taless as well...i m looking forward to capture your stories through poems.let us co-create

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