I am in pain and the pain I don’t know if I should share
Don’t know whether to say this or to with hold, I don’t know if you even care
I have a girlfriend whom I want to marry
Another life that I want to live
I have planned the name of our children with her
The colors of the wall of our home …1st,2nd trips after marriage
I wonder if to someone ‘third’ I could tell it all
But yes, my heart does fetter, soul and conscience in a constant brawl
I love her but I come back to you
And I love her more just to come back to you more and again
What is love and what is ‘illicit’?
So many times I ask and every time I have no answer
Probably its better being in the darkness of ‘self-denial’.
Nice one
ReplyDeleteAwww.... :)
ReplyDeleteI love dis one... Nothing's 'illicit' as long as its love...
We must 'Live' to 'Love' and 'Love' to 'Live'!! :)
More the ppl u love, da better!!! ;)
hmmm...nice
ReplyDeletesuperb ... i liked it a lot
ReplyDeleteThe rough reality in engrossed with words
ReplyDeletewow :)
ReplyDeleteits very nice !!!
divya u suggest real good things... thanks :)
hey it was awesum !!!
ReplyDeletethanks for suggesting this blog divya :)
awful yaar..!! gr8 lines ;) u roxx :)
ReplyDeletethx divii for dis link.!!!! i lyk it alottttt....
hey its nice .. so true ..
ReplyDeletethanx divya for the link ..
@divya: nicely explained yaar.....but jst imagine the feelings when they r not put across to the one you love.....i guess it is more painful then!!!!
ReplyDeleteThat is why, like Mahatma Gandhi said "You dont get something you want until you ask for it"
(preetam)
@preetam, this is my frnd Subhadeep's blog.. not mine... and i'm sure he's read ur comment and wud get back with his views.. :D Anyways, thanks for sneakin in.. Keep coming back... :D And yea...missing u :( So come back soon...wdout a english blonde dat is ;) :P
ReplyDeleteI have no clue as to who you 'really' are .... nor would I probably know what you would end up doing ......
ReplyDeleteMy gut feeling ( based on the little that I read ) .... does imply a mind that's fretting out with emotions, ideas , hope ....and that tenacious bit of frustration that keeps all of us hoping for more ....
Don't just stop at these things ... go beyond ....
Cheers to you going on much beyond these 3 poems ... Cheers to the every guy in this planet like you .... Cheers to the thought that as long as there are guys like u around ... there's still hope.
( Yeah, I too am of the opinion that I have consumed too much 'Tequila' while writing this :P !!! )
@ all ... come out in the open with your stories as well,your deepest insecurities
ReplyDelete@ the last anonymous comment :I am nobody special,just one of everybody... all those feelings which constitute the life of us. Would look forward to more opinions of yours
eta shob theke bhalo laglo so far
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